Family Stuff – Virginia Children Photographer

When I got home from a long day of speed walking through airports last Monday, one of the first things my daughter did was bounce up and hand me an invitation to a special “Tea” at her school. My daughter had written a poem for a class assignment along with the other children in her class. Apparently these poems were then judged to have one selected as a representative for each classroom and my daughters was the winning poem.

I am a lover of poetry and used to write a lot of it in my younger days of time and freedom. So this little trinket of a win, or honor was especially exciting to me. My 10 year old daughter is a dreamer, she has a very vivid imagination, and reads a ton, but has never been much of a “writer” so I could not wait to see what she came up with that stood out amongst 23 other students.

So yesterday she brought home her poem so she could memorize it for the Tea tomorrow. I love it, I am proud, and I want to share it with everyone. I want to read it every morning, to start my day.

Summer Days

I am the sun.

I live in the deep sky.

I shoot my warm flames on flowers.

I spray butter on the hot summer days.

I wear a big shiny dress.

You can see me sparkle on the ocean waters.

When I go on vacation I visit the baby penguins.

One thing I love is the laughter of you.

by Marta Locklear (yes we share the same name….I have a nickname at home)

8 comments

May 5, 2009 - 9:16 am

tiffani sunshine - That’s sooo gorgeous! I know you must be so ecstatic!;-) She is truly artistic….the apple doesn’t fall far.;-)

May 5, 2009 - 10:21 am

Ceci Sierra - She is a genious!

May 5, 2009 - 12:13 pm

Jen Arthur - Wow–that’s very advanced for a 10 year old poet. She has a gift!

May 5, 2009 - 1:51 pm

mel - what a gem! i absolutely love Marta’s poem! i hope you take some wonderful pics at the tea and share them if you can. I know it will be such a nice mommy daughter day.

She is so precious, and I can tell from her writing that she really is a dreamer with a vivid imagination. I would be so proud too – heck I am proud. I love seeing things like this from today’s youth. You don’t always hear about nice things like this – and I just love it to pieces!

May 5, 2009 - 2:23 pm

Natalie - That is such a beautiful poem! =) It is obvious where she gets her brilliant creativity!

May 5, 2009 - 2:30 pm

admin - Thank you all! We are very proud. As a lover of poetry…I am just blown away by the thoughts of each line. I can’t decide which is my fav…the “I spray butter on hot summer days” or “When I go on vacation I visit the baby peguins”…I mean Wow. I know I am biased and all…but she just blows my mind! I need to keep her writing. I wish I could say that she got this from me. But her Daddy is the writer in the family. I am more visual.

May 11, 2009 - 7:34 am

Julia - Beautiful ~ “One thing I love is the laughter of you” – my favorite line! Really amazing.

May 9, 2009 - 9:14 am

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